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Post by RubberduckJ35 on Fri Aug 24, 2012 5:26 pm
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Okay..

Ages... Ago... I got bored... at 3am.... So I made... A short video....
About...

The Religion Of Potatoes!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WfYGkNy4u9o

And... A few weeks back... I made... another one... cos I was bored...

The Cult Of The Masked Panda
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5cF_c8gr8_E

Just Wanting some Feedback on the video's really.. So I can make better ones in the Future.. If I do... Maby... Make another one...
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Re: Feedback wanted, Video's! :D

Post by Mars7411 on Fri Aug 24, 2012 5:52 pm
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RubberduckJ35 wrote:Okay..

Ages... Ago... I got bored... at 3am.... So I made... A short video....
About...

The Religion Of Potatoes!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WfYGkNy4u9o

And... A few weeks back... I made... another one... cos I was bored...

The Cult Of The Masked Panda
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5cF_c8gr8_E

Just Wanting some Feedback on the video's really.. So I can make better ones in the Future.. If I do... Maby... Make another one...


They Suck.
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Re: Feedback wanted, Video's! :D

Post by RubberduckJ35 on Fri Aug 24, 2012 6:01 pm
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Mars7411 wrote:They Suck.


Thanks :D
Your too kind.
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Re: Feedback wanted, Video's! :D

Post by wan26 on Fri Aug 24, 2012 8:00 pm
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The first one is half baked and the second was unbearable...
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Re: Feedback wanted, Video's! :D

Post by WallShadow on Fri Aug 24, 2012 8:30 pm
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I just took a quick look at both videos. Now first off, we're not the youtube community, they would give you much better feedback than us.

I know the style you were trying to emulate in terms of words popping up as you speak, but you slightly messed it up. Most words should have a clearn big font and be nice and large for the user to see, you should change font color and size dramatically only when there is a significant word such as "The man was hands were the color of blood. But the main mistake that you did, is that you dragged it out way to much, it's as if you struggle with every word. Talk at normal or even slightly faster than normal speeds and animate the letters to go along with it.

And trust me, it's not that bad. I've seen all sorts of crap videos.

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Re: Feedback wanted, Video's! :D

Post by RubberduckJ35 on Sat Aug 25, 2012 8:37 am
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WallShadow wrote:I just took a quick look at both videos. Now first off, we're not the youtube community, they would give you much better feedback than us.

I know the style you were trying to emulate in terms of words popping up as you speak, but you slightly messed it up. Most words should have a clearn big font and be nice and large for the user to see, you should change font color and size dramatically only when there is a significant word such as "The man was hands were the color of blood. But the main mistake that you did, is that you dragged it out way to much, it's as if you struggle with every word. Talk at normal or even slightly faster than normal speeds and animate the letters to go along with it.

And trust me, it's not that bad. I've seen all sorts of crap videos.

-WallShadow <3


Thanks, I'll defiantly take that into consideration next time :)
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